In the midst of night, rapture
began another note
playing the melodies of sullen sighs
I thought of you within
my fantasies
as though you were
nothing more
than
a part of this body;
together we lie in silence
and pleasures pain
was not an option
either wanted
but knew the moment
our bodies synchronized
upon the satin waves
the cries began
Whispers frantically persuaded
the shades of indifferent momentum -
there without
a kiss,
my body floats inwardly with
just your simple caress
held in the moment
of hours
passing pleasure
within closed eyes
You lie there
beneath me
with contentment-
thinking of lasting
ways to devour another
unsatisifed hunger...
Black fades into white
with shadows dancing
against
the raptured song
and the beating melody
pounds-
Spans of languid words
encapsulates more-
and
more...
the mingling of breath
showers
down silken tresses
'neath this reverie
Author notes
Art: Over the Edge
Artist: Danny Hahlbohm
This is not done just yet so be patient
Written May 9th, 2006
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rofl I think i scare most ppl writing like this
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Ylu have a wonderful beginning here and I can just see your mind at work as you pour so much of your soulful thoughts into the carefully chosen words that you pen. Great going Sis!
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So writing from sensuality's point of view... hmmm... I would assume all it knows is 'feed me!' let's see what you have here, Az... Hmmm... I see two bodies, and words dripping their essence, but I don't see sensuality's point of view... maybe a good subject for another piece!
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I know i know
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Nice.
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Great start. Can't wait for more!! Don't leave us hanging too long.
Jeannie D
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