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Memorial

Memorial

It's time to shead a tear my friends
for those who came before
Who fought and died for liberty
in god forsaken wars

They fought and died for us
so we could all be free
So god bless all those soldiers
your in our memories

Author notes

To all those who have ever fought for freedom and to those who gave their livies in the name of peace.
Written May 9th, 2006

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  • gullionmar
    June 5, 2006
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    very lovely write great imagery


  • 0darkAngel0
    May 12, 2006
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    awww this is good.
    a well written piece to dedicate to our dear soldiers.
    well done


  • blueyez
    May 10, 2006
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    It is so sad that so many had to die in a war we don't even understand.

  • Heartfelt Darkly
    May 9, 2006
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    What a fantastic tribute to Memorial Day!!! I love this man keep up the good work...

  • kailum
    May 9, 2006
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    Excellent

    this is great...

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