Behind the reflection,
There only stands me,
There is no deception there,
Where your soul is exposed and bared!
Behind the reflection,
The facts are revealed perfectly undeluted!
It sees right through artificial disguises,
It uncovers all the truths you live denying!
Behind the reflection,
There is only the naked truth,
Only whats exactly real,
Every single pain you feel,
Behind the reflection,
You can not hide,
What is really behind your eyes,
No secrets, No shadows, NO LIES!
Behind the reflection,
You are unmasked,
NO MATTER WHAT YOU DO,
Your exposed, The.... REAL YOU!
BECAUSE YOUR REFLECTION KNOWS THE TRUTH!
Author notes
i DUNNO WHERE IT CAME FROM BUT I KINDA LIKE IT.. WHERE U LOOK IN THE MIRROR U KNOW WHO REALLY STANDS THERE!
Written May 8th, 2006
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This is a beautifully written piece you have here dear poet. It is very nicely done it flows well. A very good point is made in this and everyone can relate to it, your reflection shows who you are {to an extent atleast} and you can not hide from yourself. My favorite line or lines for that matter of this are
Behind the reflection,
You can not hide,
What is really behind your eyes,
No secrets, No shadows, NO LIES!
Great job and keep up the excellent work.
~Jinx
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I really really loved this piece. I love the illusion of the reflection...absolutely powerful metaphor. You did a job well done on this one. And I loved the flow, and loved the fourth stanza especially. Great Job--Ann
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brilliant
i like this enjoyed the read and the words you penned gave rise to images in my head. nice imagery and good flow and feel to words of wisdom read it through again yeah .... works for me each time this is just one damn fine write
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reality lives within us even when people see a different u on the outside. we live two lives. one is caught in a world of disguise n one that only we know. nice.
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IM LEAVING MY FIRST COMMENT CAUSE I LIKE THIS ONE!
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