Where oh where is my Teddy Bear
Where oh where can he be
I cannot find him anywhere
Where oh where is my Teddy Bear
He wasn't here he wasn't there
Why oh why did he flee from me
Where oh where is my Teddy Bear
Where oh where can he be?
Author notes
Written May 8th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Round 2 (EVERYONE) by Heartofacircle.
300 points, ended June 14, 2006, 7 entries
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550 points, ended April 1, 2007, 43 entries
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What did you think
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much like the song "where oh where has my little dog gone"
http://www.enchantedlearning.com/rhymes/Ohwhere.shtml
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i liked this. kinda like a nice little jingle you'd hum in your head
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i like this you did a great job good luck in the contest
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I like it! It's very cute! Good luck in the contest.
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And I hope you find your teddy bear\
I hope that your teddy will be
makes me think of a song. Thanks for this, keep up the awesome works, and best of luck in my contest here.
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Different and simple -
too cute
Sooooo cute! Child-like perception. It was well enjoyed.
Katie
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That is soooo cute! It reminds me of my little bro (my real one) - he insists on making his teddy talk every night and teddy HAS to have a kiss and a hug. And sometimes teddy gets scared of the dark and we have to tell him it's okay. Lol - ne wayz this is a lot like him
and sooo cute
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very cute and sweet. short and fun to read.
i did enjoy this a lot.
made me smile, wish i needed to do after a bad day at work.
so thank you for this lovely poem -
This piece is cute and gives the hope of a child finding their teddy. I liked the flow and rhyming scheme. Perhaps if you cleaned your room, you would find your teddy.
I'm just kidding there! The form was great and all I can do is to wish you good luck in the contest!
Edited on May 09, 3:54 p.m. because ''. -
Good flow and rhyme you wrote this
from a childs voice well done.
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thats so cute
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cute
this is a very swwet cute write,thank you for entering and good luck in the contest,a very sweet read
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