Blue skies and radiant sunlit beams,
On an echoing wildfire,
Just like the ones you see in your dreams.
Dusky rays drifting near,
Like exploding tropical fruit,
Discovering an impassioned atmosphere.
Exposed trees in refection,
Entwined branches sweep skyward,
Silken woody barks thickset to perfection.
Misty roots embrace the land,
Magnetic ambience,
Lust reveals itself unplanned.
Author notes
Written May 8th, 2006
A contest entry
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This is such a beautiful piece..I adore the imagery...
Peace and many blessings
~A~
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Living is wonderful.
This is life !! what we see without worrying about good or evil. Wholesome honest and sincere and if you can see the beauty around you then you are living. Stay in the sunshine and keep out of the datk.
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This ia nice poem. I like the ending line, it says a lot and it is a good way to catch the reader at the end of the poem and make them reflect. I did find the first couple lines:Blue skies and radiant sunlit beams, and then ;Dusky rays drifting near,
a little bit trite or overused. Something else for blue and radiant would have been better.
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I really enjoyed this poem. Very well written.
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Very descriptive. Thanks for the entry. I will write more when we judge.
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