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Run To Me Now

If you run to me now.
I am not going to tell you no...
I am going to tell you not to let go.

So hold my hand and promise me that
we will last forever.

If you run to me now......


Yvonne J. Griffin
5/8/06

Author notes

This is based off the Goo Goo Dolls new song: "Stay With You"..


Yvonne
Written May 8th, 2006

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  • raggyann
    July 4, 2006
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    sweet and true
    nice write

  • JaysonBaby
    May 18, 2006
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    good

    hey that is really good. keep up the good work

  • prairiegal gold member
    May 10, 2006
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    Smiley- I really felt uplifted by this short poem. Clear expression of love unfolding. Reaching out to another with a hand of trust, hope and faith. Your honesty seeking noot to be betrayed. Wonderful! Thank you for sharing this with me. God Bless You Richly Dear Friend, keda


  • macandrew
    May 9, 2006
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    This is a trust so often lost.

    Well written.
    John


  • angelica silver member
    May 9, 2006
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    Dear Yvonne, I wouldn't let him go either, I'd hang on as hard as I could. Beautifully written my friend.

    Love and hugs
    Joan


  • The Emo One
    May 8, 2006
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    This poem makes me sick..its so happy...I hate that..but its okay, I guess..if you're into "happY"

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