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another antagonizing protrayal of teen angst

I need to hate myself

I need to love myself

I need to *fuck* myself

I need to sooth myself

I need to hurt myself

I need to heal myself

I need to open myself

I need to close myself

I need to kill myself

I need to have myself

I need to shoot myself

I need to hold myself

I need to show myself

I need to blind myself

I need to sheild myself

I need to let myself

I need to cleanse myeslf

I need to ignore myself

I need to abuse myself

I need to forgive myself

I need to use myself

I need to adore myself

I need to lie to myself

I need to be myself

I need to love myself

I need to hate myself

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Written May 8th, 2006

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  • God is in the TV
    June 10, 2006
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    yes, I yet to change my poetry from my emo days.

  • Dead Red Head
    May 8, 2006
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    humorous

    you already said hate myself, unless you did it on purpose, im not sure if this was supposed to be humorous, but it made me laugh, its possibly the extreme emo-esqu of it, nonetheless i still like it, but only because i find it funny.