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On nights like these (Triolet)

 



On nights like these, I dream of you
Smiles forming ever so gently
Your affection, I do pursue
On nights like these, I dream of you

Trust this offer to be true
Your needs, I will meet intently
On nights like these, I dream of you
Smiles forming ever so gently


Author notes

This is for Ann.  You are my saving grace a lot of the time.  Always there to lend your wisdom in my times of need.  Love ya hon!  
Written May 8th, 2006

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  • Cyber Artist Moderators member
    May 12, 2006
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    Ok I caught you sucking up to the boss hay... What does he want, could it be for Ann to stop poaching greeters lol just goes to show how well they are trained. Great write and words I’m sure will sooth our savage beast Oh dear I’m in for it now.


  • cherche -d -ame
    May 12, 2006
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    I have very little personal interaction with the one and only Ann. However from what I see and read on here now and then , you could not have picked a better heart and soul. I do know that if I should ever need this lady....she would be there , ( as she is for so many here on this site) Best wishes in this contest, and much love to Ann,

    reenie


  • klassy lassy
    May 11, 2006
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    "Oh, perchance to dream..." I see Pattyann's contest evokes smiles from you, too! I really liked the the softly sensual layers in this. It's lovely!
    Edited on May 11, 2:04 because ''.


  • neptune386
    May 10, 2006
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    awww so sweet. John, why can't more men be vocal, awesome, and awe inspiring like you? poo poo!lol fabulous job my dear.

    Alyssa


  • Ariosto II. gold member
    May 9, 2006
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    Beautiful..a soft elegant love poem. I need to work more with classical forms. This reminds me of their power.
    david


  • pattyann4500
    May 9, 2006
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    Awww, John! This is absolutely lovely. Ann is such a beautiful and warm lady, and this is just perfect for her. Thank you so much for this wonderful entry. Hugs, Patricia ♥


  • galfalfa gold member
    May 9, 2006
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    Awww John, what a wonderful subject for your poem..such a gracious lady and a very good friend Bravo on this!


  • wings of an angel
    May 9, 2006
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    nice poem John, good luck in the contest


  • Tears of Roses
    May 8, 2006
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    Excellent

    Encore wonderful John
    Stand up and take a bow.
    Applause, Applause!!!!!!!!!
    May you be Showered in Roses
    TearsofRoses
    Teresa


  • AnnD Moderators member
    May 8, 2006
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    John, this is absolutely beautiful..... thankyou so much for this very special write.
    I sincerely wish you good luck in the contest.
    Thankyou

    Ann

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