Eyes closed, blocks the physical world
Deep breathing relaxes the body, mind
Retires
~*~
Peaceful silence envelope my whole
Churning thoughts shutdown, total
Void
~*~
Into the void flows divine power
Unknown, never experienced
Before
~*~
Time flies, a spark of light radiates
Between the eyebrows, a point
Revealed
~*~
Spirit of self is felt, I am light
Floating in the air, everything
Bright
~*~
A new world never seen before
Appears within me, I see, eyes
Closed
~*~
Answers, truths long searched
Become plain, I discover, who
I am
~*~
Physical personality, loses importance
Spiritual existence long forgotten, now
Distinct
~*~
I am not this decaying shell
But power divine, heavenly
Soul
~*~
Enlightened and educated, my soul
Given control, I am freed, my spirit
Soars
~*~
Copyright © 05/08/2006 Poet Raja
Author notes
Written May 8th, 2006
A contest entry
- who am I ? by maa.
333 points, ended June 15, 2006, 12 entries
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dear joel,
thank you so much for participating in the contest and for having submitted such a profound poem. it is a peaceful meditation in itself revealing your inner world and inviting the reader to discover for himself what is waiting for him when he gazes inside. your sharing of concrete experience in the contemplation of your inner being is a precious guidance for those who have had similar experiences or seek a path of self-knowledge.
very few and carefully chosen words give a particular power to this write and help concentrate the reader's spirit.
thank you so much for your offering.
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Fantastic piece! Spirituality is strong flowing here, it reads like a mediation and sings to the soul. I love the whole feeling and theme to this one. It encompasses much throughout and takes the mind on a trip. Awesome job on this!
I love it! Blessings,Gypsy
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Joel you're defiantely one of the most spiritual people I know or have ever known. Becuase of that I know you also look at things from different perspectives and see all the different sides of things... and of course, appriciate the similarities and differences of each. Lovely write my friend.
s ~genie~
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o0o0o lovely meditation experience described ... best of luck
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Ahh, this is beautiful! I see this is about meditating and reaching the Highest Level of Consciousness...journeying upwards into the Ultimate...merging with Him and feeling light and pure. I enjoyed your word choice in this and the flow of this poem. Wonderful enlightenment here.
All the best,
Charishma
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very well written. my favorite is "Answers, truths long searched Become plain, I discover, who I am"
excellent recreation of an enlightened moment.
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this is a good write from you. there is such power in these two lines:
I am not this decaying shell
But power divine, heavenly
Soul
thank you for sharing your talent with me. viyanna rosemarie langager -
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!! A very spiritual write.I could feel the peace within this write where the spirit flies free, Ros
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