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Surrendered

Here is my heart
this over-rated organ
Wrapped nice and neat
just for you

I trusted you to take care
of my beating heart,
because
it beat only for you

Packaged in cupped hands
tenderly handed over,
trembling somewhat,
it is fragile and easily broken

Given with hope that it wouldn’t be tucked away
and forgotten,
or dumped
with yesterday’s garbage

A package, hesitant
to surrender
It has been shattered before,
the pieces glued back together, time and time again

Here is my heart
this over-rated organ
riddled with cracks and gaping holes
of pieces, and love,
lost



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Written May 8th, 2006

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  • Basically Amazing
    May 10, 2006
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    everything will work out momma... You find the one to treat you and not hurt you soon....XOXO