Still I wait voiceless in the cave of her uterus, hoping to feel her warmth
(wrapped)
I plead to feel you
(near)
as I sleep fetal position, embracing the dream of one day:
observe you… mom
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Written May 7th, 2006
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This picture of altra sound is beautiful. I'm pro-life. I think life is precious. Adoption is the good choice. So good thing I run into this poem.
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quite beautiful.
i believe i read this one once before, two years ago. it's even more beautiful and toucing today than it was then. you're so great.
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I love this! You have done a great job expressing atticipation and the love you have already for this sweet one.
Good luck in all.
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felicidades querida amiga..ojala que sea una belleza como tu
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Aaaaah, wonderful news, Leslie (do I have it right....you are going to be a mom)!!
. This is so beautifully written, s soft and gentle, yet with such excitement and wonder. Simply wonderful!!! Keep that little one close to your heart...
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This is so exciting! Love it! Congratulations!
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wonderful
this is sooo sweet and beautiful. I love it!!
it is a really big surprise!! Coz this was not what i had in mind or expected one bit (the idea of the poem)!!!
You did an amazing job here, with very few words but you managed to get your point across.
Well done, Bravo..
I'd applaud this.. but I'm otu of applauds.. I really don't where they go to
Keep on writing, I really loved this. And I'm sure he'll be as beautiful as You Are
Nooni
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Never had untrasounds way back when us baby boomers were pregnant - no before pictures at all. Interesting persepctive on this time.
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I don't usually go for short stuff, and I do think you could have made more of this, but this is pretty good. It must be wonderful to be in the womb! Too bad nobody ever remembers it! - oce
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Oh my god you must be really happy...that was a great poem to express your feelings toward your baby aww thats sweet I wish that my mom did that to me
but its cool well congrats stevie
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YOURE PREGNANT???? AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
that is way cool, congrats ma'am!!! I'm so happy for you!
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This is really beautiful and I hope one day soon I shall also be able to place one of my pictures here !!!
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thanks so much for your comment... the pic was just a plus
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a brilliant poem, fresh, alive, energetic with lovely balance and harmony. The picture says so much and only adds to the beauty of this. Blessings and best wishes, ~richard
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