Oh dearest one,
these words that i speak to you show not but the truth,
the ever vastness of the gentle waves of your smiles
whisking over me they fill me with life.
oh my love for you, it stands
and in that moment there is a rush,
with my arms wrapped around you
my hands resting upon your abs.
a breath of your words whispering,
that sacred love unto mine ears.
A KICK! alas
how sweet the feeling knowing you bear whats mine and ours!
oh the aching in mine heart when told we were not to be.
though king and queen do not wish us one. but us...
the prince and princess of distant land doth speak unto each other...
our love unknown to others who might spite us and say we do not belong.
oh my sweet
how time doth slow down when I'm with you.
your radiance it covers me like an endless glow amounting from thy moon
heh, these words some might feel are empty.
quick words just to tempt the body and soul into thinking it is love.
some might say to forget me. NIGH I SAY
do not forget me though some may say we are not meant to be...
hope... yes... hope is all we need. and through the fires of hell we shall walk miraculously showing all that they cannot smite our love.
oh radiant one these words i speak to you are the truth and in this time i tell you
you are the one for me and when the new life begins all shall be well
life itself has been given unto us as a gift. as a sign that we a re meant to be
oh sorrow at the words "you'll never see her again"
though through all the hardships we hath faced!
NEVER... NEVER I SAY... shall we fall under this pressure. for love ...
oh sweet love that hath fallen upon us as cupid striking us with his bow... our love shall prevail. and though this our little one will be as free as the wind when laid upon us.
oh sweet... believe me when i say that you...
truly are... the only one that can ever... gracefully pull me out of sadness... and in these final words realize once and for all
now and forever i will all ways love thee
signed in love,
written in madness,
Daimen perry
Author notes
sorry about this peice its not as aveerage as most but its using a mad man letter style from the shakespear era
Written May 8th, 2006
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thanks all who have made a comment about this poem. please applaud my work if you think it is worthy of such grace ok thanks again and maybe ill start writing a book of poems for the world to hear
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Can't get enough
I can NEVER get enough of love and life. Keep encouraging, loving and living and MOST of all sharing. -
EXCELLENT!!!
very very beautiful i must say, thanks for sharing such a wonder piece, nice job!! -
i like the wording "Oh dearest one,
these words that i speak to you show not but the truth,
the ever vastness of the gentle waves of your smiles
whisking over me they fill me with life." my favorite line of all
stevie
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Very different feel and form, but I enjoyed the flow and the emotion of the piece. Great work! Keep your pen forever flowing!
Bunny
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Good
It was cool I think. Like your poem. Best of wishes to you
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