I don't understand why they do this,
I only see it as murder,
some people think it is the right choice,
Everyone has an opinion,
I see it as cold hearted murder,
the most awful thing to millions,
its reality its abortion,
I don't understand why kill kids,
They are not guilty of anything,
all they want is to have some life,
they didn't lay down and get pregnant,
Its not their fault their mom cant work,
Its not their fault if their dad is young,
no matter how young their still kids,
why punish a kid for your mistake,
They're only innocent Babies,
why would someone have an abortion,
when babies are so wonderful,
It could be best for lots of people,
babies bring so much joy to life,
to me abortion only brings pain,
to me abortion equals death,
now i ask you would you kill your child?
Author notes
Not to insult anyone just a viewpoint.
Dark-Lady.
Written May 8th, 2006
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This doesn't offend me, but I have a completly different view. Most teenagers who get pregnant have no idea what to do. They can't tell their parents because they'll be disappointed in them. And they don't want that to happen. They don't want the feeling of letting their parents down. They don't want to have the baby because it was just one stupid mistake. They don't want to have it because they can't give their child up for adoption. So their only choice is to have an abortion. They are scared and don't know what else there is. They see that having an abortion is their only choice. Everyone else may think it's murder, but I don't. Just my opinion and view. Don't get mad a t me because of it.
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I get where your coming from and this poem is very deep and although I don't sgree with your position because many of the babies raised by tennage parents turn out as drugies or messed up in other ways so it would be better for an abortion especially since the baby doesn't have a brain yet so it is not yet a real person when the abortion is preformed.
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that is such a beautiful and sweet way to put an issue that can be very harsh into words. and i agree, killing babies is wrong, wrong, wrong
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Rock on! You captured the emotional part of this issue with such grace... *appluads* I was returning the favor of your comment on my piece, "Take me Home." But, now, I am quite pleased at what I see, may I add you to my friendlies list???
Muah muah,
Oxemity -
This is my view point aswell..
abortion is horrible.
This is a beautiful and true poem
Much love,
becca -
bravo , this is really emotional subject , and as you say , this is a kind of murder . really it is so sad when a child aborted ,he or she is killed . your poem can really describe this fact in an emotional and dramatical way . nicely written ...
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good. people who aren't able to support their child shouldn't have one or put it up for adoption. im seventeen and if my girlfriend wanted to get an abortion i would go insane and probably leave her but still stay around for the kid because im very anti-abortion/pro-life
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this was an interesting topic to write about. while i'm still unsure of where i stand on abortion i thought that you pointed out very good points. this is obviously something you feel strongly about. great job!
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