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~Hate~

I have never felt such a thing,
such an emotion as this,
It can kill almost everyone,
It can control out bodies,
It can control all of our hearts,
Its the most deadly feeling,
and now i can feel this feeling,
the feeling i have hid from,
I took pride in not having it,
now i can feel it in me,
the strong hate running through my veins,
the emotion drives me insane,
the feeling makes me think wrong,
I used this feeling to kill her,
This feeling why i hate her,
now i sit in Hell for her death.

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Written May 8th, 2006

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  • Nans Lady
    May 8, 2006
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    Excellent

    Vert poweful words! and hate is a powerful word but! l know how you feel l felt the same way once but what the heck l knew l was better then her....but hey damm her to hell and move on ..good luck very well written....
    Edited on May 08, 11:33 because ''.