I hang up the phone
you will be here in 1/2 hour
I feel the heat rising through my body
the anticipation of what is to be
It has been so long since we have been together
I have missed you so much
Our bed has become a cold and empty place
Each night I would lay my head on your pillow
the smell of your cologne still lingers
I light the candles and the incense
I search through my lingerie to find something
that you really like and one that holds memories
from other nights of passion
The lacey purple is your favorite
the silky touch of it on my body
makes me think of your hands on my body
I can hardly contain myself
I hear your key in the door
and my heart starts pounding
you walk through the door
My heart is home
I run to your open arms
and I feel your cold cheek on my face
as you hug me so tight that I can hardly breathe
I take your hand and lead you to our bedroom
You love the way it is set up and you love what I am wearing
You kiss me and I am weak at the knees
Your touch does such things to me
Take me..I am yours
My body is yours, explore it, enjoy it, devour it
We collapse on the bed as we kiss eachother
so passionately, deeply
my tongue searching out yours
yours finding mine
slowly you slip my purple lace away
we are body to body
skin to skin
I love the feel of you
I love the smell of you
I love to hear your breathing in my ear
We are so intuned to eachother
We are the closest that two people can be
A part of you inside of me
the heights of ectasy are expanding
ready to explode
I call your name
You call mine
Together we share the essence of love
The room is full of us
The physical us, the audible us and the
satisfied us.
Gently I lay my head in your arms
and you kiss my forehead
My heart is home
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Written May 8th, 2006
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well done
erotic and sensual but done with class, taste and style. I have always enjoyed reading about everything you've written, (whta I've read over the few years) I also liked the feeling of complete and utter fulfullment you have with each other.
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man am I late!...
...although this piece was done way back...I really liked it, you are a very passionate,soulful"woman".Good job!
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I loved this poem. We have similar ways of writing erotic poems. The phone is interesting and you may like this one: http://allpoetry.com/poem/2767470
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yay!
I can relate to this piece so very well. I really think this is an awesome write and am truely impressed with your talant. You definately have a way with words m'dear
Thanks so much and please keep writing!
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Thank you for your kind words on this write. Their is nothing closer than 2 people sharing an intimacy that brings them both to an ecstasy that is hard to even explain. Im glad you felt it.
I will be reading some more of yours... -
In the expanse of a love anticipated to the actual culmination in sensuality's hands in the embrace of warmth flowing into the valley of dreams to come out trumps with such a beautiful journey is a tribute man's power to love,even though for the momentary devouring and exploring that comes with apparent passion,to explore the mind to befriend the soul to amass such beauty so as to go beyond the realm of ecstasy inasmuch as oneness defines the duality of fate in its heady cadence is love is life is union of two minds betrothed to two souls Shubs
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Thank you so much for your comment. You are very lucky to be with the person you love. Unfortunately this was written a long time ago and that person is no longer in my life. The tides change and so does life. Maybe one day your wife will surprise you...
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I wish my wife would say these kinds of things to me. or even do those kind of passionate things with and for me. This was great. I loved every line.
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Wow, I love this poem the emotion, desire, and passion it is a great piece.
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Thank you so much for your comments on this piece. I want you to be honest..Its the only way to really know how a piece works.
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I liked the emotion, but I feel as though the words sort of got thrown together. You have written better. Although this is adequate, I know you can do better construction-wise. The emotion and feeling is there, but it feels more like a letter and less like poetry than some others of yours. Sorry ... that's my thought.
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Thank you so much for all your praises about my work. It really means alot to me to know that people really feel my writing. It comes right from my heart.
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wonderful
well written poem i really like it. -
Thank you so much for your comments. It just inspires me to write more...
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I can relate so deeply to this... It's so ... intense and sexy. Every line speaks with so much passionate love, it's awsome!
Amanda -
I agree, this is a very poweful write. Anyone who has ever been in love could probably really feel where you are coming from. I know I do. You wrote this very tastfuly as well. Thank you.
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Im so glad you like this piece. Most of my work is written from experience and other just from scenarios in my head. This one was written from a scenario...how wonderful that you were able to feel the love...that means I was really in touch with my feelings. Thank you so much
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Beautiful
Just beautiful and so heartfelt. Your love leaped from your words. Great job writing this and expressing you hearts desire. Great name for the poem as well. Thank you for sharing. Jeannie D
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Thank you so much Emily for your kind words.
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wow, this is sweet, and powerful. very full of passion and sincerity. i love the way this is written.
your friend
emily
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