God of thunder hear my cry,
send fourth stallions from your sky.
Hooves of fire and manes of white,
to tread the earth with all their might.
Bring the rain for fields of green,
to feed the seeds that goes unseen.
From darkest night to brightest day,
fill the streams and soak the clay.
Drummers beat a thunderous tune,
for cloudy skies to hide the moon.
For just one storm will give the chance,
to feed our tribe with this rain dance.
Author notes
Written May 8th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Contest For Partners In Crime Group Only!! by Partners In Crime.
300 points, ended May 16, 2006, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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great poem keep up da good work
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Congratulations
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Congratulations
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Fantastic poem, i just love reading it
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good poem and I wish you good luck in the contest....
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wow this is beautiful a excellent poem great work love it well done good luck xxx
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Awesome flow, you have talent! I can see your interpretation of the picture too, great job.
Sarah
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Good Luck
Awesome piece... the flow was great and the piece itself is very captivating to it's readers. You have done this picture a great justice. Thank you for your entry and good luck.
Keep writing
Countrybabe
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I was thinking about this for this picture, your poem is awesome. Good luck in the contest
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This was nice...it was a joy to read...flowed really well and gave this great image of the Indian rain dance. The poem does justice to that graphic.
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AWESOME JOB!
A very well written piece, with aweosme methaphors.....
Perfect words chosen for this piece, I thank you for sharing with me on this site......
Be blessed with love and light.....
As always,
AngelicMistress
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A wonderful piece dear friend.
Wish you luck in the contest.
Shahrzad
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Excellent piece here Dove, your words are very fitting for the picture. Your rhyming was flawless as always.
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really like this very good nice metaphors in there with a nice flow sharp and short enjoyable read
ebony
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