I知 told to write what I feel.
This scares me sometimes for I wonder if there are pages that are able to withstand me unleashed.
My writing has become so personal that I知 always doubtful whether to put it up for others to view.
I知 told to express myself physically.
You encourage this not knowing my battles are bigger than Mike Tyson and Evander Hollifield combined.
I知 told to say what I feel.
I don稚 believe God has endowed any human with the fortitude to listen to my ramblings.
So I write-
For me to remain controlled
And,
for you to save your ears.
I can always buy more paper.
Author notes
Written May 8th, 2006
A contest entry
- Originality by T a.
350 points, ended July 16, 2006, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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you don't need to go buy a stack of paper with poems written on it to sit in your room because you are doing a fabulous job of typing them online and allowing others to enjoy reading them. great write, you are very honest and this was intersting to read. the last lines hit me the hardest. Keep up the good work never stop writing, good luck *Jordan**
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thank you for taking the time to comment. i appreciate it.
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thanks so much. i appreciate it.
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glad you liked it.
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Thank you soo much . i really appreciate it.
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I loved this.
Its amazing.
The ending is really clever.
"So I write-
For me to remain controlled
And,
for you to save your ears.
I can always buy more paper."
that is amazing! -
merry meet-
wow. wow. thats all i can really say. wow.
This scares me sometimes for I wonder if there are pages that are able to withstand me unleashed.
i rally liked this stanza. i really do.
blessed be-
bella -
I think this poem is soo very cool and I think it was amazingly written and I thought that it was soo true and the fact that people fear to put things down for others to see, many people are afraid what althers may think and so on, food luck in your contest.
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