Loneliness and agony
Dances all around me
it didn't really matter
until pain as well had found me
I float in the sea of sadness
I blew in the breeze of madness
people never cared
for me a broken girl
never am I happy
for I am always lonely
Darkness is surrounding me
It wraps it's arms around me
I shiver under it's coldness
I look at him with boldness
He tightened his arms around me
So coldness now sips within me
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Written May 8th, 2006
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I would change line one to 'Loneliness, agony'
Other the that the rest is great!!
I would call it 'Loneliness' and that's about all I have on this one. -
thanks...i actually hate this poem... but still thanks!
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good poem... well written...
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This is a real good poem. You show a lot of sadness in a few lines and managed to use personification and metaphors! Good job! <33Serbianbeauty
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Thos is short and good I liked it alot. Your poems don't suck hun<3
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This poem is quite short, but you managed to embed a whole lot of sadness within the lines here... A very beautiful way to express your feelings. Thank you for sharing this with us, I truly hope things will get better for you somehow!
welcome to the sites of allpoetry
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