Your eyes looked at me,
like diamonds in a fire.
Though I wish you could see--
my love did not expire.
I never wanted you to leave.
My love never did end.
Now it's like I cannot breathe.
My heart just cannot mend.
You go on--you're always so well...
while I walk on,
forever to fail,
and you're always gone.
And I'll always fail,
while my love for you goes on...
Like living in the worst part of Hell...
Yes, you're always gone.
I don't want you to leave,
but all good things have to end.
I'll never be able to breathe.
My heart will never mend.
Still--you look at me--
You're so much higher
than I'll ever be.
I'll always be in love with you...with fire.
Author notes
It's an old piece, but I thought it was well-written and I'd like to enter it in a contest; thus I chose this one. Your opinion is appreciated.
Written May 8th, 2006
A contest entry
- The Wedding of Crystal - Heart and Andy Stephenson by Andy Stephenson.
400 points, ended May 15, 2006, 9 entries
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excellent
this was lovely ... I really enjoy reading it .. Thanks for entering
Be Well
Crystal -
Thank you for choosing to enter our contest. This seems like unrequited love. Is it a reality write. I hope if it was, things worked out for you.
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