Sweethearts come and sweethearts go
But friends will last forever
And I need a friend right now
And maybe more much later
If you can take a chance
I'd gladly take it with you
two lost soul in this world
who knows what we can do
I start the journey with spirit free
a hearts that's open wide
Who knows what will happen
But I sure would like to see
Author notes
To all the lovers out there starting a new journey through love.
Written May 8th, 2006
In a list
What did you think
Comments
1 - 6 of 6
-
What a great tribute to friendship and what can become of that bond. This was one of the warmest, hopeful writes that I have read today. Keep writing and Best wishes.
-
Spoiled by the last line unfortunately: "sure" is NOT an adverb and its misuse in this way is a tragic endorsement of low educational standards in schools. In my day, anyone using this would have been soundly thrashed and rightly so in my humble opinion.
-
excellent
very good write of expression of hope caring and freindship. May God bring you many freinds who appreciate you as you are. It nice to tell freinds how much you care it makes them feel appreicated and wanted very good write wish you well take care -
I love it
I love it. It expresses how much you rely and love your friends even if they don't know it most of the time.
This truly made me smile, and it is a great write even if it's meaning lies deep within my heart.
Blessings~
Avenorell -
WONDERFUL POEM
This was so sweet. I do know how friendship can lead to love and back to dear friendship. There is nothing more wonderful then a true lasting friendship. I find God brings people in and out of our lives. But certain ones He choses, He will have them stay forever. Thank you for sharing this warm and lovely poem. about such a friendship.
Take care, Sandy
-
This is truly a work of hope. I really enjoyed reading it.
Thank you.
Adding your comment:
1 - 6 of 6
2 old applause
