Thoughts of you
still warm my heart.
We face life
though love will part.
Copyright © 2006 Robert L. Huntsman
Author notes
Word count 14
Septolet has a total of fourteen words divided into two short stanzas with the second stanza giving a slightly different slant on the topic of the first stanza.
Written May 8th, 2006
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short but good...this is a good poem! really good! U know I can't write short poems because i have so many feelings to lay down in one and u have the gift the write something so short and yet can still turn out really good. This is what makes u a special poet...short poetry - not everyone can do...I CAN'T!!!
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Thank you for the great review.
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Its soo sweet, I really liked it , its very simple but nice.
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sad but nicely written, you got me started on these short forms not sure if mine will ever be as good as yours ..but I may make you run for the gold one day..
keep penning Lindalol
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Thank you for a wonderful review.
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I like the warm feeling within this one. It is as if an old love or maybe a "wish I had of" person still gets the blood pumping in the right direction. Yet, you know, it will never happen.
I think you have done a good job of relaying a big message in a little bottle.
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Very interesting form. Your simple but clear explanations are always wecome to all of us. Thank you. I will try this form. I can count words this way.
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I love new forms and this piece is so nice, but sad.
Wish you luck in the contest.
Shahrzad
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