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I love you.

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I LOVE YOU


If I told you that I loved you
Would you accept the way that I feel?
Would you open up your heart to me
And let me prove to you that it’s real?

Would you tell me the same
And take the moment seriously?
Or break my heart
And leave mysteriously?

I want you to know the way that I feel
I need to know if what we have is real
If not, what must I say or do
To prove to you just how much I’ve fallen in love with you?

There is something in my heart
That I must share with you
Just open up your eyes and see
How much I care for you

There is so much that I feel
Whenever we’re together
And I don’t ever want to lose you
Darling, let’s stay together

I’ll do anything that you ask me to
As long as you are there
To comfort and hold me
With your tender love and care

I’ll show you a world
Where love is a part of life
Not just for a minute
But, for the rest of your life

I’ll always stand beside you
In everything that you do
And whenever you feel unsure
Remember that I love you


You’ll never have to be afraid
Of anything anymore
Just close your eyes and look beyond
Let our love open up another door

To another place in time
That only we will know
A place where we can live as one
Where our fires of love will grow

Let us remember the way
That we feel for each other
For deep down in my heart
There could never be another

To fill my heart and soul
The way that you always do
With endless laughter, joy
And the ability to pursue

Anything and everything
That I have ever wanted in life
Like having you beside me
As a friend, lover, and wife

With every breath that I take
With every passing minute
I’m thinking of way to spend my life
While having you in it

Trips and vacations
To destinations of your heart
Where we can live forever
Where out endless love will start

Where our dreams will become reality
Our work will all be done
And in the end it will be you and me
Looking back on the love that we’ve shone

I really do love you
And everything that you are
The light of my life
You are a shining star

I want you to know that I hold
A place for you in my heart
That is only yours and
Is set so far apart

From every problem, anger, and hurt
It is a special place unlike anywhere on earth
Remember this poem and everything that I have said
Whenever you’re weary or unsure in the days ahead

My heart is yours, oh if you could only see
Just how much I love you and how much you mean to me
I wish that you would let me see what lies within your heart
So that I could learn what it is that is keeping your heart

If you would only stop and try to understand
That there is so much more that I hold inside of my hands
It is a love so pure, honest, and true
That waits so patiently only for you


 

 

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Written May 8th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • earthstar
    October 16, 2007

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    I love the feel that it comes from the heart. This is the way love should fee. It very romantic and practical in nature of love.
    Where our dreams will become reality
    Our work will all be done
    And in the end it will be you and me
    Looking back on the love that we’ve shone
    The whole write is a beautiful read. I love these lines thinking that this is the way love should be. Great work. It a very lovely and thought provoking work.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    May 9, 2006
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    Hello Deborah! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on this piece. It is one of my favorites that I have written and I am glad that you enjoyed it as well. Take care and have a wonderful day!

    Allen0826


  • deborahseyes
    May 9, 2006
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    WELL DONE!

    Wow, you take the fear out of letting go and falling into the uncertain world of world...loved your tenderness throughout this piece...


  • alyssaxo
    May 8, 2006
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    Awesome poem, I really liked reading it. Wonderful job & keep up the great work. You have such talent.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    May 8, 2006
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    well done

    Well done my dear Jeremy, as I kenw it would be. Always a romantic lol. Great job beautiful read. Thanks for sharing once again a wonderful piece of work. tip my hat to you dear friend.
    xoxox
    Victoria
    dont ever stop writing.


  • Kiran silver member
    May 8, 2006
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    This is such a lovely and romantic poem! It came straight from the heart! Beautiful words.
    Kiran

  • FindingFate
    May 8, 2006
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    I love this but have I already read it or something similar maybe... Oh I don't know but I sure do love your hear... You quickly became a favorite and I hope you are well... Beautiful as always Jeremy... Trina.


  • honey bear
    May 8, 2006
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    i shal have to come back to this as when i applauded it has not shown up and keeps telling me now i have already applauded so i shall leave it a while and return to see if that works congratulations once again on a magnificent write

  • honey bear
    May 8, 2006
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    beautifull

    this is another beautifull poem from you my friend, you have such a magical way with words it makes you feel warm in the heart to read them,how wonderfull it would be to have someone feel of you with such love and devotion,a wonderfull write good luck in the contest


  • mysticstorm gold member
    May 8, 2006
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    Jeremy,
    This is beautiful and romantic. It reminds me of Blue Mnts cards. I love it! Best of luck in the contest.


  • Angelwatchingme
    May 8, 2006
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    This was a very good piece. Good Luck in the contest

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