You think that I'm weak
Because I'm not strong
But I'm stronger than you
In ways you'll never know
I may not have muscles
But I can still strike
Hit where it hurts
More than any punch
You think I'm no threat
And I'll use that against you
You'll keep thinking I'm weak
Until it's too late
My hate is my reason
My pain is my fuel
My mind is my weapon
And your soul is my target
You think I'm no threat
But soon you will see
I'm more than a threat
I'm a promise
Author notes
My first non-personal poem in a while. Hope you guys like it.
P.S. Sorry about the background/color problem, but I really like this background and there wasn't really any color that showed up on every single part of it.
Written May 7th, 2006
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Ok wow! this i really get! when you say "my mind is my weapon" even though i could kick a lot of @ss my mind is my weapon! This reminds me of my poem called "the crik looks nice today"
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Yes Oren A MUFFIN OF DEATH. Really good stuff though.
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Kicks Ass!
A Plaintif's paradise where a massacre lies dormant. Be wary of the others with the same angst against violence. For they may not show the same mercy. Restraint truly is a wonderful dream! Even better when ...in reality. Overall, Congrats! I read it a few times and find it a peice worth reading time and again! -
Love it all, wonderful job, i do hope so see more of this in other writes by you. Bravo!
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Wow Oren i like this. And im kinda glad its not Personal or i might have to go over there and teach u a lesson
haha what am i gonna teach you! Your so much smarter then me 
well lovely write and u know that i love ti 
haha that was kinda dorky but im a little out of it bad critique but what can i say bout such a masterpeice?
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Very nice Oren, I like your word choice and how your poem flowed. Made me smile too. I was going to complain about your text, but since you put a disclaimer up, oh well
I like the lingering feeling of being a time bomb waiting to explode on the most unsuspecting time to hurt a person just thinking you're uncapable of erupting into a fiery ball of fire to engulf everything into flames and ashes. Anywho! Keep on writing you gold buddy
~Ib~
You deserve a muffin for this 
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