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Fine Yet?

Claiming all this strength
But inside
I’m falling apart
Broken to pieces

Why?
Because…
Suddenly these walls collapse
And now I’m visible
For everyone to see
Because…
I’ve become part of your past
Playing a role
Of a black and white photo
With edges of rips and tears

My naked body
Stained with cries and yells
With a broken heart
Bleeding wounds
And what’s left
Is a tradgedy
A disaster
That I know won’t get better

You said my smile
Was a piece of art
But now it’s cracked
Along with this heart
While the blood runs
Slowly and painfully
Down my chest

And I’m crying!
I’m begging!
I’m grasping
For a hand that cares
For a heart that loves
For arms that hold
Me when I’m too weak to sit
When I’m too weak to speak
To talk, to smile
To stand so I can answer back
If I’m fine yet

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Written May 7th, 2006

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  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    June 3, 2006
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    Great job expressing these feelings. I can so relate to them. I understand feeling exposed and naked if my walls were to crumble and fall. Great job on this. Thank you for sharing. Jeannie D


  • Dygurl
    May 8, 2006
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    awsome write hun, once again, wanderful. Stay strong. keep writing.

  • crImsonIde
    May 7, 2006
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    mmm i like it a lot very nice job,
    beautifuuul poem