As soft as a tear drop,
Gentle as rain,
Transparent gossamer wings,
On windowpanes.
As real as a daydream,
As solid as sunlight,
As heavy as sleeping,
As light as deep night.
As hazy as frosted,
Ice on a window,
As cold as the moonlight,
Lilting through rainbows.
As we pass through our days,
Gliding on thoughts,
Far, far away,
Cabalistic talk.
Minds that are binding,
Together the same,
Transparent gossamer wings,
On windowpanes…
Author notes
Written May 7th, 2006
A contest entry
- Rain by more like war.
300 points, ended May 27, 2006, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Amaze Me! by Shantalina.
550 points, ended February 27, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thanks for entering...this is beautiful, like I said before. Great job...and good luck.
SAE
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WOW
this is an ace poem! Beautiful too... i really can't think of enough words to describe what it made me think of and feel... well done and good luck
rach x
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This is beautiful....so captivating. Thanks for entering!
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This is so beautiful and I absolutely loved it! Amazing poem! Good luck in the contest.
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As soft as a tear drop,
Gentle as rain,
Transparent gossamer wings,
On windowpanes.
that is genious in so many words! i love it, i so wish i could write like this i can only imagine. well i loved it and i hope you keep it up.
Much Luvs for you and your poem
Liriel -
"As real as a daydream,
As solid as sunlight,
As heavy as sleeping,
As light as deep night"
This is my favorite part. I love the comparing that you do. It's so different and so beautiful at the same time. I hope that all of your writes are as wonderful as this one. Keep up the wonderful writing. And i wish you much good luck in your future writing.
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