Shhhh, hush now, close your eyes. For
Inside you will find a
Love that never lies. An
Eternity of passion followed by
Needs to be fulfilled. A
Torrent of desire is mine to give, as
Longings slowly be stilled. And
Until life stands motionless and
Ceases to just be,
I'll smile for the time I have,
Dreams of silent lucidity.
Invade my soul, my mind,
Take my body as you will, and hold me in
Your loving arms, until time stands still.
5/7/06
Author notes
The title comes from the song, by Queensryche, just made into my own little version.
Written May 7th, 2006
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Storm -
Oooh, that is very beautiful! Feels very enchanting to me. Well, it's what I felt just reading your words. How love can enchant you!
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Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. It is most appreciated.
Storm
PS and thinking can be quite the good thing -
Thank you for the comment Val, appreciate it
Storm -
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A very deep and emotional write. Absolutely loved the title!
Your poetry requires me think more than most. I would like to thank you for that. Nice job! -
Me likes. This is awesome. Longing and devotion and love and passion and I can just keep going, but I won't. Beautiful writing Sis.
~Val
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