she said 'your existence triggers this sort of insanity
im not okay if i know youre alive
you dont exist to me
it keeps me
from
raping you
attacking you
making love to you
and ripping your flesh apart with my teeth'
so she sat there in her ripped up jeans and a pair of fishnets
held up by a pink lace garter
her face beyond beauty and still with her careless hairdo and cheap sunglasses
simple black eyeliner and black mascara
she looked like she was done up to be on a cover of some magazine
and i couldnt help but wonder why
she had this effect on me
she says 'youre just so sexy i want to strangle you
kiss your lips and bite them off
your presence is impossible to ignore
and your existence triggers this sort of insanity in my head
i want your cock
to stab right through me
and fuck like monkeys
in a pool of scratched up
bleeding flesh'
so i took her home and tied her to the bedposts
to make sure she wouldnt kill me
she screamed my name and caused me pain
i choked her to keep her quiet
guess she has the same effect on me
Author notes
this is about what happens when lust becomes so intense it mixes in with wrath.
i'm categorizing it with Lust.
Written May 6th, 2006
A contest entry
- Dark..... by drusilla36.
300 points, ended July 8, 2006, 43 entries
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Comments
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Don't worry about my past comment, I have now placed it in with Lust! Sorry about the trouble. I will comment on the piece later on today or tomorrow!
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I'm putting this under the category of Wrath if you don't mind as we have already got 6 lusts. If this is a problem I can change it slightly.
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thank you, im glad you enjoyed it
lurid is my specialty good luck judging the contest.
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Exceptional
I think I love you.
Fucking brilliant piece. It did hit a rather lurid point, that was a little descriptive for my usual tastes, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. Will certainly be taking a close look at this again.
Best of luck in the contest.
Slainte
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