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The Cards

I left home in 1991 and I saw hell
Her name was Rhianna
She played
She lives now!
The end!

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Rj tale of horror!
Written May 7th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • kitkatkatie1
    May 8, 2006
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    hahaha wow... nice... i like it short AND to the point!

  • christinaumsted
    May 8, 2006
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    Thankyou!


  • Manoura xx
    May 7, 2006
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    nice poem, short, but nice, really, you can really put evil in a few words. Keep up the good work. And good luck in the contest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    THE END (heehee)


  • ew no
    May 7, 2006
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    hahaha this is cute....