aching, to glimpse Arcadia
my devious thirst
seeks liberation from
this electrifying intoxication
Leather binds me
I slither and grind
Against your voluptuous
Skin, silk smooth
You rain your sensual
Poison, taunting me
Submissive I skid
Towards exhilaration
Rapturous
You spice the strawberries
Gliding them
Across my curious mouth
I am eager to taste you
Felicity
Eager to experience elation
You hold me at the edge
With carnal thirst
Enraptured
You grease me
Ready for your exploration
My misdemeanour
Does not warrant
Your battery of
Pain
...........................Bounce
You electrify me
.........again
Author notes
I really enjoyed writing this and have used all the words. The piece is a real departure for me, I hope you enjoy it and thanks for the inspiration of this contest, I am very grateful. LWiB x
Written May 7th, 2006
A contest entry
- How Good Are You? (FOR MEMBERS OF MASTERS, MISTRESS, SLAVES AND PETS ONLY!) by Celticmoon.
400 points, ended May 21, 2006, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Loved this! Has such good sexual energy, great write!
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Thank you, you are very kind LWiB x
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Wonderfully erotic overflowing with sensuality. And the flow is perfectly sweet. I quite enjoyed this piece. Well Done my dear Lady
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Thank you, Sir, you are very kind. Celticmoon gave me the words and I put them together into this write, I am very pleased with it, My work tends to be rather wordy so this is very satisfying for me.
Many thanks
LWiB x -
this is quite a wonderful write you have penned sensual and had a nice smooth flow to it
love and light
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Thank you Natasha
. I have just written a piece I am very proud of for my new Master, Once he has seen it, if he approves, I shall post it and see what you all think. 
LWiB x -
Superior write!
LWiB ~ You have a very sophisticated writing style. I enjoy your work very much and this is no exception. You have superior word choice and inflection. You are skilled and very talented. This is a fine example of erotica done with taste and refinement. Best of luck in the contest ~ Natasha
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Thank you Ktulu, you are very generous, LWiB x
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Thank you Syr,
LWiB x
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Very good job with this. I really enjoyed reading. Good luck to you in the contest and thanks for sharing.
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Very nicely done LWiB. It flow very nicely and mmmmmmmmmmm.
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