Zzz.......
Dreaming peacefully of a true love to enter your life
A girl to fulfill your dreams and considered a wife
As your sleep continues to grow deeper
These questions follows this lonely hearted sleeper
Is there a dream girl out there for you
One who can be faithful, real and true
Someone who is there through whatever
No matter what happens will keep love there forever
Searching and searching, repeating the same dull tasks
Ending up with the broken heart when love was all you ask
Wishing and praying for love each and every night
The search is now over because you've reached a girl that's right
The dream has just begun and we're constantly on each others side
Showing emotional feelings so we know there's nothing to hide
You and me floating through dreamland and hoping to float forever
Knowing that you've found the perfect one to leave you..never
Your prayers have been answered since I have appeared
Having a girl to finally love you back my now seem weired
Constantly hoping that this isn't just another relationship
But a long lasting love making trip
Now its time for you to wake up and leave this perfect love and world
Oops this isn't a dream you've found me already...your dream girl
Author notes
Love You Alex!! It doesn't matter if I win or lose this contest this poem is for you!! COMMENTS PEOPLE!!!
Written May 6th, 2006
A contest entry
- My Dream Girl !!!!!! by DarkFire-J.
844 points, ended May 21, 2006, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Darling
Oh such sweet discovery
no one can pillary
you are the lover
There is no other.
smoosh for your gold
Janet -
beautiful
yeah, you deseved the gold. glad to know the one who beat could write this well....congradulations on the gold!!!
~jalisa
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NonChalantLaughter
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tini -
This is a beautiful and romantic piece. It is full of imagery, some great rhyming, and a fantastic flow! I am not surprised that you earned gold with this, for it was deserved!
Keep up the great work and good job!
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If there was only many of you to make the world a better place. You are a great catch and I hope he realizes that! Love and kisses, the Shaker
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Thanks!
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Bittersweet I'd say...not sure why as it seems meant just to be loving, which it is..don't get me wrong. Anyways I like it very much, good luck with the contest. I hope you win.
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