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Come Back

I Call to you
With no emotions what so ever.
You call to me
Trembling words that aren't together
But deep down in our hearts
We share life that will show us
The reason for our life
And why we are the chosen ones

Love is like it stars
it goes but come back
It floats above us night and day,
It goes but comes back
And when you are silenced
It goes but it comes back
But nothing will make me cry
Inless you go and never come back

Night turns today
The sun shows no emotions
Should I feel ashamed?
Or Higher my esteem promotion
But deep down in my heart
I'll feel destroyed without you
The reason for my love
I can't explain these feelings without you

Love is like it stars
it goes but come back
It floats above us night and day,
It goes but comes back
And when you are silenced
It goes but it comes back
But nothing will make me cry
Inless you go and never come back

I don't want to know
If you will never come back
I don't want to know
If you would loose me out of track
I don't want to know
If you are punishing me
And I don't want to know
If you are leaving me

Love is like it stars
it goes but come back
It floats above us night and day,
It goes but comes back
And when you are silenced
It goes but it comes back
But nothing will make me cry
Inless you go and never come back

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Written May 6th, 2006

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  • irishsecret2005
    August 20, 2006
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    great poem...or is it lyrics? anyways wonderful emotions and great lines..
    eliza

  • ray10444
    June 4, 2006
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    WOW wow is all i can say your a really good poet butt when you say love is like it stars i think it would sound better if you said love is like the stars


  • Artemisa-Curls
    June 2, 2006
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    excellent

    I really like your poem, i mean i love it. It made me see something sooo freakin tite really wow...
    Artemisa


  • ShadowEyes
    May 26, 2006
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    good

    Hello. This is good. i like it alot. U did a good job on this. Feel free to stop by and read some of my stuff... Please do... I need comments. lol. well, newho... this is very good! I love it! later!

    >Crimson<

    AKA

    Amanda

    AKA

    Amy Lynn


  • Glamorous
    May 26, 2006
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    HOLY CRAP!!! Wolfgang this poem is SO FREAKING GOOD...It's...like amazing...I L O V E it...it's...it's...wow. <3 Amazing job, hun.

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