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Lies

I Speared your lies across my floor
i watch the blood link from
your neck
flowing on the wooden floor
soon it will touch
me
its all my fault
blood
bleed
slit your throat
drink the blood
full of lies
you where my liar
now your my bloody liar
sweet blood
your sweet blood it touches
me
i wish i could sleep

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Written May 6th, 2006

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  • OleanderKisses
    August 22, 2006
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    I like this poem. It`s dark and deep. I have some poems kinda like this. I don`t know if you have read them.

    -Jill


  • silenced soul
    May 20, 2006
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    this was really good stasier i really liked it you should of told me that you updated so that i could of commented you sooner its been forever since ive been on so yea well this was really good i liked it alot luv ya lots-lissa-


  • Silent09
    May 12, 2006
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    I think its retarded lol
    but yea i guess idk i dnt realy care anymore
    i just felt like putting down what it woudl be like for a liar to slit there throat because u lied and what there blood would feel like against ur skin knowing that you killed them but they were the lair how the blood was worth all the lies or were you wrong and when the blood final touches you u see that you are the same and the blood puts you to sleep a sleep you will never wake from cuz you were the same and your sweet blood should be spear across the floor so sum1 can read your lies...idk im slow o well!!
    Anastasia
    luv u jamie ttyl


  • SkinTight
    May 10, 2006
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    hey... yeah i dont really get the meaning of this poem. but then again im kinda blond lol. so if u explain it 2 me then i bet i would!! well i love u asia! and look... im finally back on AP!! yahooooooo! lol kidding. luv ya
    ~Jamie~


  • Silent09
    May 8, 2006
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    i think its retarded lol
    but yea i guess idk i dnt realy care anymore
    i just felt like putting down what it woudl be like for a liar to slit there throat because u lied and what there blood would feel like against ur skin knowing that you killed them but they were the lair how the blood was worth all the lies or were you wrong and when the blood final touches you u see that you are the same and the blood puts you to sleep a sleep you will never wake from cuz you were the same and your sweet blood should be spear across the floor so sum1 can read your lies...idk im slow o well!!
    Anastasia


  • myselfinthemaking
    May 7, 2006
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    Well, it makes it interesting to read. I like it. It's different, but what isn't?


  • Silent09
    May 6, 2006
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    i like it but i dnt think any1 else will really get it the way i want them to so it is in white

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