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Don't Leave Us



Please don’t leave me mom.
I won’t let you..
I won’t drain you as you ask,
I will not let anyone take you.
I’ve already lost one parent,
Don’t let me lose another.

Don’t leave us.
Amber,
She’s already lost two parents..
Please don’t leave us here.
We need your love,
Your guidance.

We love you.

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Mom, Don't Ask Me to Kill You.
Written May 6th, 2006

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  • BlueIsisQueenRaven
    May 9, 2006
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    Thank you for bringing me back to life.

    My darling daughter....I thank you for your words. I am ashamed I worried you so. I love you and Amber dearly. In my own grief and sorrow I forgot that. Pain sometimes temporarily blinds one. And I forgot that although I may have lost my beloved, I still have you two...who need me and I, who needs you. Thank you for reminding me of that. I love you very much.

    ~Bluevampyress~

    ~Mommy~


  • Kevo MF Last
    May 7, 2006
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    I have a feeling that you will be getting much closer to your mom within the next week or so. Believe it or not, she would gladly listen to you talk about me and would more thna likely aprove of it. Just make sure she knows that you still care.