Give Me Peace
Don’t remind me of yesterday
Help me block it from my mind
I saw the devils eyes
Dancing in that fire
Please take me far from here
Where butterflies still fly
Where the sounds I here Is music
not the roar that’s in my ears
Where I see children smiling
And not dying in my arms
A place to lay my head in peace
With my family all around
Author notes
Sometimes I get this way, I hope it does bother you. But I write what I feel. THis is an older one I came across looking for a new one I lost.
Written May 6th, 2006
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SAD...but good. I will pray for you. God is with you always, including your darkest hour. I pray that you have peaceful dreams. Blessings to you soldier
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so much pain seen through the eyes of someone who is there, i wish i could take away all the pain .but life is not that way. god bless you for all of your help and writing over there much love to you all mary.
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very good
hi , its good to write these things down my friend, i hope it helps to get them out and share. you are in the hearts of so very many and one day soon you will be surounded by your loved ones again.
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It's really good, I think we all have memories that we wish we could forget, you do a great job of putting it in word I like it. -
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I understand what the atrocities of war can look like and it is a sight that I never want to see again and I am sorry that anyone has to see it. -
Very honest and emotional poem. Very well written. Great job expressing yourself. And thanks so much for all you do for us back home. I really appreciate you. All of you over there are in our prayers. Be safe. Jeannie D Hunter
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This is a beautiful poem so very full of emotion and feeling and so so sad - I cannot imagine how these experiences affect your life but having this oulet as a poet, I know, helps a lot. Keep up the good work
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Try Sweet Motion or Wild Fire
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What do you like Janet Love or true
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You kindly commented on one of my ppoems and Im returning the favour and Im really glad I did, this is beautiful and I am with you on this one. I will read some more. Have you got a favourite one that I might like to read
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WONDERFUL POEM
This was so heartfelt. I can only imagine what you face each day. My prayers are with you for a safe return to see the smiling children chasing the butterfflies during the day and the fireflies at dusk. Take care, Sandy
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very good
i like it.it's sad,but it's good.
you put a lot of feeling in your writing.
thats good.it keeps a persons attention.
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