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Bullet

You're the bullet through my brain
My own disease
So much adrenaline
But too much pain
You're the bullet through my brain
So just pull the trigger
You know you love to kill me

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Written May 5th, 2006

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  • Titus gold member
    June 18, 2006
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    This would be a love hate relationship where rows are made up and team work comes together sometimes, I'd call that pretty normal. Nice work!!


  • forget my memories
    June 12, 2006
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    wow.. this is by far one of the best things i have read.. i dont know why i love it so much just the way it is so short but so perfect! amazing job! <3


  • Ramona Wright
    June 11, 2006
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    If the bullets already in your brain why would someone kill you, arent you already dead? its good tho.

    <3

    Ramona


  • icebloo
    June 3, 2006
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    Yup

    thats a good poem it shows that you arent araid of death and that you accept the fact that some peop,e dont like you..thats how i am most of the time..i know a lot of people dont like me..lol but i am me and they can kiss this...lol great poem i can totally relate...lol


  • x CheepPurfume
    May 12, 2006
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    My Goodness gracious! Thisss was amazingggg. hehe You're work is great sugar. Keep up the awesome work, dawlin. hehe I loveee ya
    Tori

  • alturnative101
    May 7, 2006
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    good

    Its very good chibber. Sounds like a Cure song lol


  • AngelDeAmor
    May 6, 2006
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    Staring down the barrel of a 45... ? Nice... I likes it mona.


  • Ryan gold member
    May 6, 2006
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    Ashers, this may be wrong, but all the bullets in the world would want your sexy face.

  • Spork the Mighty
    May 6, 2006
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    This is actually pretty good. Be happy. *poke*

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