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This Ascension (triple nonet)

Fantasies are playing through my mind...
How I long for you, my soulmate!
I ache for your touch, your kiss,
all over my body.
You get me so hot,
what we could do...
oh my Gods,
I feel
wet.

Tease,
please me,
I am yours,
and you are mine,
my pet, my love slave...
Take me higher, to this
holy place, this ascension,
this, where flying feels like falling.
You exist only for my pleasure...

And I complete you, yin to your yang,
I am Goddess, we make Oneness...
I bring you to life, alive
as you enter me and
we are made one flesh.
Penetrate deep
in my soul,
release,
love.



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for ThisMortalCoil
Written May 5th, 2006

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  • May 7, 2006
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    Outstanding

    This is wonderful, my love. I love the way this flows, as well as the message


  • tragedienne
    May 6, 2006
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    I looove the form of this! I don't think I've ever seen it before, great job! And the poem is quite sexy too. Sweet, nevertheless. Bravo!