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Wipe That Tear Away

Don't cry because you're all alone.

You're not as good looking when your heart is broken.

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Written May 5th, 2006

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  • gitu
    May 10, 2006
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    good job

    Briefly stated but totally correct! It is almost a catch 22 type situation...because when someone is lonely they are sad but it makes it harder to remedy the situation because the sadness poses a block to meeting others. Your write states that so much more eloquently than I just did - LOL
    Great job,
    James


  • daftann
    May 5, 2006
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    hmmmm, so true. no one wants to be with a depressed person. great write, i expected more but i think the shortness is what adds to its greatness. keep it up.