Cobalt blues framed green trees
When at dawn this morn as i stood in the breeze
Then violet and pink spread all about
And above white and powder feathered throughout
Then i stood and watched in wonder
Iridescent lines of gold held me under
The spell of nature, as that familiar ball
Rose quietly, brightly, over all
The splendor reflected on the March snow
Filled me with awe as i watched and now know
Though the dawn comes surely every day
The colors are born in different ways
I guess that is why i like to see
The dawn, the canvas of the day yet to be~
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Written March 6th, 2003
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AWESOME!!!!!!!!
BRAVO you have so vividly captured the magic of dawn & it's beauty. With your beautiful words....
Ahhhh I feel refreshed & its just after 1am....
Magic Write!!!!!
Best Wishes
~Tracey~
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This so amazing and beautifual it just leaves me awe speechless this has to be my new fave pls return the favor ~Becca~
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I do I do
I really do like your poems
They are so colorful
been reading John Stienbeck
Grapes of Wrath
East Of Eden
Winter of Our Discontent etc etc
In Winter of..
one line struck me
and just kept growing
it was
"It was a blue green yellow day."
Inspired me to write
The Colours of Heaven and Earth -
Beautiful poem... it reminds me of my childhood when I would visit my grandmother's farm and wake up with the sunrise and watch the sun come up over the trees
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very beautiful piece here.... you've painted a very lovely picture in my mind
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Excellent! sunsets and dawns two of the best things on Earth...I want to invite you to read some of my friends also...seawnds...manicmuze...rhiannon all great writter's. We have one thing in common, a poetry room on Pal Talk called Sea's World of Poetry in the Meet Friends catagory...we read, listen, have some fun and inspire each other...All adults a great gathering
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very beautiful Susan! You are marvelous at painting a picture with your words. How do you manage it? No matter, keep writing. You have a great talent for it
-Heather -
Awesome Write
Now this poem is just wonderful, Wow!
I enjoyed reading this so much, thanks for sharing with AP!
Your talent is shown well on this page!
God bless and take care!
~Timothy~ -
Beautiful
Ohhhh, that was cool.
The colors, the description, everything.
I am in a dark mood as u can tell by my works today but that brought a bit of light to my soul.
You have a very beautiful way with your words. I very much enjoyed this.,
hugs, Tisha -
So}} So}} pretty!
Beautiful poem wrote just lovely
perfect images for the month of March
Love this! Very nicly done" Susan
You do write so beautiful! Love and SmileSSS Mina~
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Dawn is always full of hope--promise for me. I am, indeed, a morning person...
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A pleasure to read!
On the rare days when I see the dawn, I, too, am filled with awe. It's a wonder to see...with the air so fresh and clean. Lovely poem, Sis! It's a keeper! *smile* (Nice pic'!)
Love Ya!
<3 Maureen
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Lovely Susan, I love sunsets and sunrises and the pretty colors in the sky they set off its lovely.....to see yes.......Sherry
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Another beauty Susan.
Your work always is...
Pretty piccie too.
Blessings, ~ Ce -
I see you find solace and healing in nature as I do. This is a beautifully descriptive write. The picture you chose is wonderful as well.
Red -
you are such a nature woman, you go girl...
another beautiful write, true amazment and grace...you picked the best time of day to write about...bravo to you ~~Jenn -
OMG, Susan, this is magical... your words always fill me with such awe. I wish I could see the world with the splendor that you write about.
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The splendor reflected on the March snow
Filled me with awe as i watched and now know
Though the dawn comes surely every day
The colors are born in different ways
Love these lines especially. Could also be a metaphor. A picturesque brush of words. Well done.
~Mary O -
Groovy!
So beautiful are the pictures you paint. Almost makes me want to get up to watch the sunrise.. almost.. hehe
Kali -
This is Great you painted this picture so well you didn't even need the photo! Wow! I could see it. Reminds me of looking out on the snow but it is to bright to look at, then again that is later in the day. Anyway this flows very well and was very vivid. I loved it! ~Sharon
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You paint a vivid and breath taking picture of words. Oh so beautiful, so soulful. Just loved it.
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Susan, you write so beautiful! I wish I could write like this. I will pray for you to get published. Keep 'em comin'.
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Absoluutly wonderful and amazing!
Just BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!! I love all the coloful images I got from this! Dawn is my favorite part of the day....especially in the spring and summer because I love to wake to the morning bird~song! 
Very nice Blush!!!!
~Laura
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I loved this alot
The dawn, the canvas of the day yet to be~
this one line says so very much and is so short but sweet, thank you for sharing sis. 
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Oh Susan, this is beyond beautiful Perfect rhyming, your precious words create the most lovely picture
Love you,
Karen
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Excellent
A delightful write Susan .... Imagery is truly beautiful and heartwarming ....
Take every care dear friend,
Sammy.
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what a pretty picture you paint Susan,this is so lovely,and the imagery id beautiful
~Acantha~ -
do not touch it
You really gave a great visual through the words and the pic. Isn't it amazing , that no matter how hard the best artist tries , the colors of nature can never quite be imitated on canvas ?
Reenie -
Well done.
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Very nice imagery your have I was so caught up in the lines that I didn’t notice the rhyming but well done excellent
-Silent -
Awesome!!
Hi, I loved this poem. It is really great. Nature poems are among my favorite ones. The picture you painted in my mind makes me yearn for spring even more than I already did.
Damon D. Brewer -
You find a way to touch a smile through nature's eyes!
I did enjoy this my friend!
Bill -
beautiful susan, will look forward to tomorrows sunrise.
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Beautiful
I really love this, great visuals and such wonderful hope.
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very nice poem susan. very nice rhyming and very nice imagery as well as the picture to add to it. i really enjoyed this. it's very descriptive and i enjoyed it a lot
kayla* -
lovely write
much enjoyed* -
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This draws a nice picture, a lovely piece that you have written here. It holds so much within it.
A good piece here.
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