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Because

Because we live in a world where mothers sell their children for drugs
And a 12 year old is more likely to join gangs than clubs
And a boy can beat another boy to death for being gay and still get a college scholarship
And a kidnapped child is only important if his parents are rich

Because we live in a world where police carry guns but can't protect us
And a man shooting his wife is less important than the MCI merger
And we let murderers walk free just because they're a minority
And a man can rape a 4 year old and still be out of prison in 10 years

Because we live in a world where everyone hates everyone
And the death penalty is only a good idea if we don't like the person on trial
And not racially profiling is more important that the truth
And we only have freedom of speech if what you say isn't offensive

But mostly,

Because we live in a world where greed prevails
And we can be thrown in jail arguing with our president
And we can be maced for telling a corporation it's wrong
And we can be killed for caring about others

Because we live in a world where it takes bombs and guns to get anyone's attention

Because we live in a world where we have to struggle to maintain our basic rights

Because I believe no government, no corporation, no church, should have complete control over the people

Because I believe in freedom...

I support the Freedom Fighters

Author notes

Teehee. I feel the same way about poems that I do about my stories, you can love 'em, you can hate 'em. They're mine, not yours, and I don't care if you are a republican and this pisses you off. My mind, my rules.
Written May 5th, 2006

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  • grannyeri gold member
    May 5, 2006
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    Freedom is a good thing, and you certainly express your opinions very well in this poem. Easy to read and understaand - makes one wonder just where it will all end?


  • Debbysmiles gold member
    May 5, 2006
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    Because we live in a country where we have the right to express our beliefs freely.. I say amen. I just wish we would heed the warnings.. and belief our actions affect everyone..
    Good write.. debby


  • pyewacket
    May 5, 2006
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    This is fabulous!!! I couldn't agree more with your thoughts! I am glad to see someone who has such strong, well-worded beliefs and is not afraid to be putting them out there!!! This is well written, sadly quite true, and needs to be heard by as many people as possible! Thank you for sharing your thoughts, stay free, and good luck with the fight!