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Master's Pleasure Part 1- The Beginning

They lay together,
side by side,
Him caressing her breast.

She is anxious,
He could tell.

He kissed her neck,
and moved way down south,
touching every inch of her,
making her wet as He went.

She wanted Him.

He eased into her slow,
than faster and harder,
she was almost there,
He was too.

Then they came together in one big climax.

He chained her to the bed,
and positioned her so her ass was in the air,
then He stood behind her wondering what to do next.

To Be Continued...

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This is a poem of many to come in the series. Here is the link: allpoetry.com/list/29677 i also chose number 5 for this contest
Written May 5th, 2006

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  • PersephoneInWinter
    May 9, 2006
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    oOo, I ♥ this. i have not had any boyfriends and 0 experience, but if i did, i would write erotica all the time. god i love this! very visual. i cant wait for the next ones in this series!

  • All his
    May 7, 2006
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    This was a very visual poem. Great job!


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 5, 2006
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    I see you are redoing, good. I am glad you are still posting them. Once again, you are going to take off with this. Just remember, let them flow, they will come. (oops, a pun)

    Very good my dear, very good.
    Mommie

  • coolchick
    May 5, 2006
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    Loved it!!!

    Wow, this was one of the most visual poems, I read, good job!!

  • drooling4cena
    May 5, 2006
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    good

    thank yu baby, i'm glad you loved it.
    8love*


  • ChaingangAngel
    May 5, 2006
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    awesome

    This was really good ,,, I liked this one ... Love ya
    Desilou

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