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My song

Flying through the mountain
Must be silent
Sleeping in the sunlight
Everlasting summer
Dancing with the wind
Look at the sky above you
"La la laaa la da da da da da da aaa"

Whispering in the rain and breeze
Will remember
Walking in the long grass
Letting sounds whisper to you
Something that is precious
"La la laaa la da da da da da da aaa"

Crying in the moon light
The cooling Breeze

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I dont really know if I should keep going, look at it ad tell me what you think okay?
Written May 5th, 2006

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  • angelsslayer
    June 12, 2006
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    nice imagery in this. Great write.