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Here I am

I'm here waiting for you
Waiting for you to love me
But it is so hard to
Yet, I'll try to be patient

I see you every once in a while
Yet you don't seem to care
It's me the one with a smile
When will you ever notice me

When your life gets tough
I'll be there to help
Even when you have had enough
I'll still be waiting for you.

Author notes

Well I wrote this in school one day and just now had a chance to post it. I don't really care for the ryming or flow of this piece so if you have any suggestions please let me know.
Written May 4th, 2006

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  • lillmissunshine
    August 7, 2006
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    here is the link for it.allpoetry.com/Poem/1873551 oh ya and your welcome!!!
    Kim

  • Timothy Timothy Tim
    August 7, 2006
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    Nice.

    How very sad! School love is tough. It doesn't get any easier, though. Nice work, though you know I wish it rhymed more. You wrote a poem about elephants? What's it called? And, thanks for your comment.

  • Cody Heitzig
    July 6, 2006
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    ive been alright.it feeks weird i havent been on here in forever

  • lillmissunshine
    July 3, 2006
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    oh It was nothing I love to comment on peoples poems. I think your poem and mine are about the same thing. I could definatly relate to your poem also. thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment.
    Kimberly

  • Beautiful Irony
    July 3, 2006
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    Thank you for your comment!!!!! It meant loads. Anyway, I love this piece. I could definatly relate, and it was definatly heartfelt and I think almost everyone will be able to connect to it!
    Nice write
    Sarah

  • lillmissunshine
    July 3, 2006
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    oh thanks. I wrote this from personal experiance along with most of the other poems i've written.
    KIMBERLY

  • rockchick247
    July 3, 2006
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    aww this is sweet! i like the ideas behind this. really great write, i think it means something to us all, especially me! lol, keep writing

  • lillmissunshine
    May 10, 2006
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    well thanks cody. I really apprecitate your encouragment(sp?) thanks also for being so faithful on reading my poems......you don't have to of course , but i do appreciate it.
    *KIM *

  • Cody Heitzig
    May 9, 2006
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    great

    i really like the poem.your getting better at writing.keep up the good work.well ill talk to ya later.


  • FireyAura
    May 5, 2006
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    Ya, most guys never ever see that......EVER well, it's ok...was this wriiten about Jonathan...or should I say (what did you call him...Bob maybe ) Well, little sis, keep looking up and things will get brighter....even though guys are stupid Remeber that saying......"Girls rule, guys drool" Good job Kim

    *God Bless*
    's and 'es

    ~*Chelsea*~

  • lillmissunshine
    May 5, 2006
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    well thanks for the "words or widsdom"!!!!!!!! I really do appreciate you always being there well ttyl
    *kim *


  • Sharcu silver member
    May 4, 2006
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    Very heart-felt... I'm sure whomever this is written for would be very privaleged to have someone like you in his life. You are a very sweet girl, Kim. I'm sorry he doesn't notice you... sometimes us guys are just stupid like that and can't see when a girl loves us and is standing right infront. Nicely written! Short, but to the point. Keep up the great writing! Thanks for finally sharing something new with us
    --Tim

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