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Where did you go?

Where did you go?
You just left me here.
Without my best friend,
Without my mom.
Where did you go?
A year, 7 months, plus a few days,
Was when you left me.
On purpose?
I don’t know,
I never will.
But you’re gone,
So does it matter?
I miss you though.
Where did you go?
Why did you leave?
Was I that bad?
Did you not feel loved?
Or was it just the addiction?
Where did you go?

Author notes

fort minor f/ holly brook (where'd you go?)


this is not one of my best. i just felt the need to write and this is what came of my words. please comment!
Written May 4th, 2006

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  • I have never heard the song that inspired your poem but after listening to it I see how it could inspire such an amazing poem.
    thankyou for sharing.