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Youll judge me pt. 1 (Ill judge you pt. 2)

YOU'LL JUDGE ME PT 1

You'll judge me on my hair color-You'll judge me on my clothes

You'll judge me on my intelligence-And the the nail polish on my toes

You'll call me a flake-So call me forgetful

You'll call me a bitch-If I give you an earful

You'll judge me on my humor-You'll judge me on my beliefs

You'll judge me on my morals-You'll judge me on the spaces in my teeth

You'll call me a freak-So call me flirty

You'll call me a slut-If I'm not home by 9:30

You'll judge me on my family-You'll judge me on my taste in food

You'll judge me on my opinions-You'll judge me on my attitude

*You'll call me a welfare-You'll call me a hypocrite

So call me what you want-So call me out on the truth

Ill call you what you are to your face

And I wont lack an ounce of proof*

ILL JUDGE YOU PT. 2

*You've whispered behind my back-doesn't mean I didn't hear you
You've shattered my feelings and my heart-I forgave you
You've given me the version-of the god honest truth
Now Its MY turn*

*Your a used up piece of trash-Shattered vision of a saint
Intoxicating with a breath-But perfects what you ain't
And I don't even have to try-To be smarter than you
Your looks wont get you everywhere honey-and now your walking in my shoes*

*Let me judge you-Ill slap a label on your back
Your everything society wanted yesterday-And now.. your in the past
You have no morals-you have no goals
besides flaunting yourself-till everyone has two eye fulls*

*And their moans and groans will turn to selfish tears
And there you are stuck in a marriage.. with heartache and fears
All us little punk`d freaks-will be standing idly by
while your past regrets hit you-and I for god sakes don't you cry*

*I may have a nervous breakdown-once in a while
and I may shake terrified-and put on a fake smile
But I believe honey there's a word for you-besides spoiled flake
God damn it I hope you rot in hell-your just a sorry mistake*




Author notes

Okay as you can tell I am very pissed off at the moment at quite a few judgemental people and I quite feel it is their turn.
hope you enjoy!

Peace out!

~&~KIDD~&~
Written May 4th, 2006

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  • ShadesXofXGray
    May 5, 2006
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    LOL I love all of you too.. its actually not about anyone in our family .. its about a friend of mine who.. thinks for some reason that she is better than me and everyone and everything esle.. this is just my little way of showing her just how wrong she is.. haha
    love you!

    Peace out!

    ~&!KIDD!&~

  • Tink89
    May 5, 2006
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    MUST READ!!

    FUCKIN' RIGHT DUDE!! this poem kicks some MAJOR A**!!!! loved both parts of it! Caught my attention and definetly kept it!! Great work as usual!! you have a talent and you spit the truth!! And THAT'S WAZZUP!!! you got dude!! Im sooo Printing this out and hanging it on my famous..well not that famous poem wall where all my fav poems go!! ya corny but hey your on like 3times now so ya dont need to front!! neways great stuff!!


  • bambie k2004
    May 4, 2006
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    OH JEEZZZ...I hope that I'm not one of those people..LMAO...NAW if I wanted to say something..I would say to you...LMAO.. But I must ask who the married one is..there is only me and Jean... I have a fifty fifty here...lol I hope you got it all out sister..I love you munches even if you are a flake, and a flirt and a jerk...lmao..
    Just remember... People say things that they don't mean..and most of the time they say it because they care to much..Well in a family anyways... We all love you baby girl...Kisses!!
    That is all
    Bambie

  • sweetpea0611
    May 4, 2006
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    This is really good. I can see how much feeling you put into it. It is good that you are letting all of this out.


  • May 4, 2006
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    i love this like woah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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