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I Thank You



I Thank You

To you,
My newest friend.

You are unique,
Upon everyone I,
Have ever met.

You were the first,
I had ever known,
And you weren’t as,
Different as I had expected.

I was surprised by how forgiving you
Were and for that,
I Thank You.

Little did I know back then,
Our Alpha.
That you and I would ever become friends
For half a year now,
I have known you.

Over that time,
I have done things,
I am sorry for,
But you have stayed with me,
And for that,
I Thank You.

Over this time,
You have helped me,
You have supported me,
And I have tried to return,
The favour.

For I am truly,
The Pinkie to your Brain,
You have truly been a,
Great friend to me.

For that,
I Thank You.

To Zobbit, Pozo, Brozeo and Zoe.
And all the other personalities you have,
I Thank You.

For your Eighteenth birthday Zoe,
I thank you,
I Bless you,
And I Wish you Happiness.

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Written May 4th, 2006

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  • pozo
    May 4, 2006
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    Great poem Chris. Bits of this I didn't even know (you've done things? Apart from little things I can't remember anything In fact, I feel I've done more- been bad at sympathy when you told me sad things, not given you work right away etc etc) I really liked this Still a bit funny about having my name online but at least it's done for a good reason like this Thanks for this tribute
    All the best
    Your friend
    Pozo


  • Hope2MakeIt
    May 4, 2006
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    how sweet this is for your friend. i am happy to see this type of writing as so much is of heartache. it is nice whan love is shown. thank you for allowing me to read this from you. hope2makeit


  • One Eunique Pixie
    May 4, 2006
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    awesome

    This poem is so sweet. I love the flow and emotion behind the write. Thanks for sharing, keep writing.`