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Master's Pleasure-Part 17- The Group Surprise

As yet another mastered
Performance came to an end,
Both men seeming
Quite fulfilled,
She rest her head
Back onto the pillows.

She begged of him, silently
To be taken to the shower.
With care, he removed
The cords binding her body.

His friend had left,
Only for a moment,
As he escorted her
To the tiled stall.

Water turned hot,
Steam rising throughout
The room, and echoes
Ringing through the air.

She could hear his breath,
The rise and fall of each
Seemingly anticipating breath.

She shivers.
Something about his
Breathing made chills
Run down her spine.

As she showers,
He watched her form
Through the glass enclosure.
His arousal was fast
Becoming apparent, once again.

Her head flung back,
Water spraying off her hair,
Trailing down her body.
And she gasped.

He smiled, watching
Her face contort in
Pleasure as hands roamed
Every inch of her skin,
Lathering her with soap,
Washing her most intimate parts.

She tried to count,
One, two, no, four.
Four pairs of hands
Ravishing her bare body.

As she finished bathing,
The hands continued
To pamper her,
Drying her.

She saw the smile
On their faces.
Master and his friend,
A wicked grin they had.

She looked questioningly,
But pleased.

He spoke softly,
Telling her she was to
Return to the bed,
Without bindings.

"These four men
Are under my employ.
And as your Master,
You shall serve them tonight,
For this is what I please"



To be continued...

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Written May 4th, 2006

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  • ZorroTheFox silver member
    May 8, 2006
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    this was great, it has been a while since I've been able to read anything and this really hit the spot. keep up the great work.
  • Fabulous! LWiB x

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 6, 2006
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    LOL, each person to their own. I would never condemn anyone's work, I just happen to be a little warped and twisted. But as for the master, I am my own master, well sort of. But that's another story another day.

    Thank you for your comments, much appreciated.
    Storm
  • Romantic King
    May 6, 2006
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    Lovely!!!

    Looks like I should have checked your poems before I entered your contest. Not sure if I can write like you do but at least could have tried. Wrote only one of this type before and it was not much.

    Anyway, I enjoyed your peom but will have to read a few more of the back ones to glean more of the stuff that makes you so hot and
    enjoyable, for your master, I mean

    Just don't want to get you into trouble, see

    Much Love

    RK

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 5, 2006
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    I never claimed to be fair....

    One pump, two pumps, three pumps, MORE!!!
    Stroke it to the left, stroke it to the right...
    Satin sheets and candles
    Strawberries and cream perhaps?

    I can keep it up...



    Literally!!!



    And I am doing pretty good, thank you
    Autumn

  • xxprophet gold member
    May 5, 2006
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    No Fair No Fair - Oh Boy Here we go again

    One Potatoe, two Potatoe, Three Patotoe, Four
    Shit 1 million bottles of beer on the wall - LOL

    How are you lady

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 5, 2006
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    Well, I hope either you are short or your desk is tall, or it still may present a problem. You made me smile, and I needed that.

    Here let me help you think a little...
    Whips, leather, lace...

    Need more???

    Thanks for the comments hun, appreciate them
    Autumn
    Edited on May 05, 9:47 because ''.

  • xxprophet gold member
    May 5, 2006
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    WHOA !! Beyond Words

    as always EXCEPTIONAL

    I just realized something reading you at work
    is not a good thing. I'll have to sit here at my desk for the next 10 minutes or so and concentrate on something else

    Baseball 1,2,3 okay again New York Times, California LOL

    EXCELLENT LADY I LOVE YOUR WRITES ALWAYS...
    SENSUALLY EROTIC

    LOVED IT!!
  • drooling4cena
    May 5, 2006
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    good

    awsome mommie!!!!! i totally loved this one, it made me hot as well, hehehe. good work and i cant wait for the next one!
    Love,
    Drooling
  • Sunshinegf
    May 5, 2006
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    great work on this extotic piece
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