One step left
Two steps to the right
Cross your legs
Squeeze them tight
It's coming out
Yellow, bright
When Mother Nature's calling
You can't fight
Author notes
Written May 4th, 2006
A contest entry
- New members contest - May 2006 by AP Greeters.
300 points, ended June 5, 2006, 78 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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This is too funny! I'm afraid it might not fit the rules, but I understand it all too well. If it actually fit the criteria, I'd already have found my choice for winner!!! LOL Hugs, Patricia
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Though I did find this very humorous, because we have all had bouts with Mother Nature in that regard, I fail to see how this fits the criteria for the images that needed to be chosen. I recommend either editing this, or resubmitting to make sure that you are not risking the chance of being disqualified.
~ John
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Thiso ne was funny, but I dont see it fit anywhere in the contest. If this was your attempt at cinquain or the other, make sure you add the option in your author's comments. Or maybe you have not read the rules, please read it and edit before the contest closes
Good luck.
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This was a wonderful little poem. It is very humorous and a unique poem. Please put the option number in the author comments so that you comply with the rules.
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Wow, I burst out laughing. That was so funny. That is definitely looking at Mother Nature in a new light.
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This was quite unexpected, though it did make me giggle a bit since I can relate (but who can't?). This lighthearted approach makes for a unique interpretation of either of the pictures.
Remember that you must put the option you chose in your author's comments in order to maintain eligiblity for judging. If you need any help in doing so feel free to ask any of us greeter folk!
Thanks for entering, and welcome to the site.
Best wishes in the contest,
Stacy
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A poet after my own heart! lol There is nothing as good as unexpected humor-thanks for the smile! (I think your screen name suits you well) vj
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so I think you got us all by surprise... 
I'm not sure where it fits one of the two pictures, but if one of them inspired you to write this then it is okey 
just remember to put the number of option in your author's comment
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hilarious...An insightful look at a common but largely ignored topic.
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This wasn't the type of mother nature write I expected to read in the contest. Be sure to add your option # to your author's comments for the rules. Best of luck and wleocme to AP
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Well! The idea of saying that elimination is due to Mother Nature. thinks
Hey. it IS! lol. How unique and written well overall.
Make sure you place the option in the Author's Comment place so that it can be completely eligible for consideration.
Welcome to the site. Warmly, CookieZeal -
Very humorous!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I think we can all relate to that. This was very humorous and you can't fight it that is for sure. I wish you the best in the contest. I think you forgot to mention your option in the author comments box. Also you did not do a cinquain so I'm sure it is option 1 and then tell which picture inspired it. Welcome to All Poetry and enjoy many happy hours while on this great site. Joyce
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Definately a vivid humurous write that has me laughing. And it is a quite the unique approach to the Mother Nature topic
Be sure to put your option in your authors notes so you will be in full compliance with the contest rules.
Best of luck in the contest and welcome to allPoetry
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For little words you made me giggle and made a point to me seems stright forward and speaks truth. We all dance about when in need of a pee!! ( I do when out on the beer) This was different to what you would read most days.
well done on this write and good luck in the contest
Welcome to the AP site
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Edited on May 06, 3:31 p.m. because ''.
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