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Touch is closer then expected

to sit next to the wondering
to speak with the wise
to have dinner with the wolves
and read the young men's lies

to take in the enemy

and serve them a drink
the emotional attachment is stronger then you think

eliminate
the young men
subtract all the lies
stop the dinner with the wolves because they are
cloaked in disguised

the wise men always says
you only know so much

so don't tempt the emotions
when they're close enough to touch

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Written May 4th, 2006

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  • Poetic Hearts
    August 9

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    This a very deep and thoughtful write. I like how it makes the reader think at how powerful emotions can be and close they can be to the surface of our lives. Iike really like this write. Keep it up!

    Poetic Hearts