Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Women of Your Valor

© Bob Barra, 4-24-06

Lately, Lord, I’ve been touched,
By some women of Your valor;
My heart, with grace, has been re-clutched,
For those exuding with much honor;
I don’t know why You’d let me see this;
I already know You’re good;
Do You wish to make my heart break with bliss?
Did it happen with You hanging on some wood?

O, Lord, I clearly see Your majesty,
In the most feminine of traits;
They are truly raised from carnal travesty,
To be taken through the pearly gates;

Noble1 is she who bears a joy divine,
Radiating from Your courts above;
She has seen how You are kind,
Rejoicing in Your love;

Samplette seems a lady o’ grace,
Revealed through her many writes;
She must write, seeing Your face;
Yes, she keeps You in her sights;

Pattyann holds Your gentle spirit,
I sense the kindness speaks of You;
Sure she blesses those coming near it,
To provoke praise; You’re so true;

Glenda seems to bask in virtue,
Given by Your gracious hand;
It glows alone with holy hue,
At does such by Your command;

Behold MamaB, of heavenly poise,
The essence that speaks of Christ;
Borne because she’s one of Your choice,
That she’d enjoy the Life;

Molassis is Your holy dove,
Wrought with wings of gold;
Declaring how to be borne above,
With truths borne from days o’ old;

Behold some facets of the Prince;
Give glory to the Royal Jewel;
This, His work, from the cross, since;
Gladly, each His tool;

Bless them, keep them, Lord,
In Your precious hand;
Protect them from the demon horde,
They seek to heed Your command;

Holy Father, please make Your love,
Their deep and great persuasion;
They are not separated from Jesus above,
Regardless of the situation;
I see, Lord, Your magnanimous will,
Your glory in their existence;
Before them, by You, I am so still,
And gladly such, in an instance.

Author notes

For all the ladies of Momma's Li'l Taters.
Written May 4th, 2006

In a list

What did you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 13 of 13

  • M0ofi3
    May 5, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    It isn't a question of deserving but you are a blessing. Sorry but I'm not backing down on that one. You've been a great friend as well as an inspiration. So you belong on this list; even moreso, since I know you best of these all.

    SO THERE!

    Love, with blessings, sis;
    B


  • Molassis
    May 4, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    I really liked this when you shared it on the contest page... it's awesome Bob... bt honestly.. I KNOW I don't deserve such an honor but thank you anyway...

    There are some great women of God mentioned in this poem... you did an outstanding job writing it! ~Melissa


  • M0ofi3
    May 4, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    God bless you, AuntieM.


  • Mamabekaboo
    May 4, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    This is so neat!! I bet it was hard trying to put Mamabekaboo into the poem!!! LOL Thank you it is beautiful.
    Because He Lives,
    Beka


  • M0ofi3
    May 4, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    I'm glad you liked it. I would be honored if you did put this on your page.

    God bless, Auntie.


  • Glenda L Hand
    May 4, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    WOw, I am honored and touched. . What you have written about me is a lot to live up to, maybe it will help me to remember to be a women of virtue. May I post this on my author's page? (with credit of course!). hugs

  • M0ofi3
    May 4, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    I am honored to have written, and then to have you referring to this as a masterpiece, AuntieSis. I was blessed to write it.

    God bless you...


  • Samplette gold member
    May 4, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    I am so blessed and honored to be included in this wonderful masterpiece written from you heart. You have the heart of Christ, and it is a pleasure to have you in my poetic life.
    God bless.
    Sam


  • ShelleyA gold member
    May 4, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    You're very welcome. I'm fairly new to the site, only started posting at the end of January, and it's quite all right. It takes time to get to know someone and we have only 'met' recently. God bless. Shelley

  • M0ofi3
    May 4, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    Thanks, Shelley. I would have had you included in this, but I hardly know anything about you.

    Thanks for your comment. God bless you...

  • ShelleyA gold member
    May 4, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    A lovely write. Beautiful flow. A lovely tribute to these women of faith. Heartfelt, deep with emotion. Well crafted and a much enjoyed read. God bless. Shelley


  • LegalEagle
    May 4, 2006
    Edit | Reply

    Nice work

    Very nice work here. The images are well done. This has a nice flow and tone to it. The message and theme are intact and it does give one something to think about here. Thanks~


  • Sharcu silver member
    May 4, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    I wish I was a woman so I could have been included in this Wonderful writing here, Bob! I know whenever any of them get around to reading this, they will love it just as much as I liked it! Love ya, big brother!
    --Tim

1 - 13 of 13