One smile - All it takes for you to turn me
To tear apart the veil between worlds
To tear open my soul and drown me,
Bury me in emotions of love for you
One smile and I’m again forever yours
One smile – And all I ever knew crumbled
You stole me into you, forever trapped
You took it all and gave life back to me
Breathe life into me again, my angel
One smile, my legs give after, little nymph
Author notes
Work in progress, just figured I'd post what I got so far. Think my writer's block is finally letting go again... I dunno yet though, we'll see I guess.
Written May 4th, 2006
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awesomely great!
this is totally the kind of write i love to read... its amazin' because i cand related to it soooo well... i am very excited to see what changes you will make to it!
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Heh, yeah you should go read the complete one. it's posted as well.
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2007762
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well this is so pretty!!! i love you!
p.s. do you remember our coffee times on msn? lol, i miss them. -
This'll be updated soon enough, I've got the finished version, but no time to type it in yet.
Edited on May 12, 5:39 because ''. -
it's pretty... really want to see the finished piece *smile and hugs you tightly*
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